SORRY ACCIDENTALLY DELETED MY POST!!! SORRY SORRY !!!
Good job! 8/10-->9/10
Nice!But go lighter on the colourful background:7/10-Bowen-
I deducted 1 mark because i could not be sure what was at the bottom because of the light fontthe wording.Another one was for no citaion of sources.The last one was for the lack of appeal to me.-Bowen-
What about the part with 3 !!! ?